New pitch
 Revised PLOT
CJ the main character wakes-up on the ground bleeding from his face and appear to have been in a fight.
he looks around puzzled and finds the guy who beat him up is standing over him, mocking him and laughing.
earlier...
CJ and his two friends are joking and skateboarding in the park. they stop to look at a girl across from them.
they stare at her still joking around, and talk about how fine she is.
The two friends persuade/ dare CJ to go over there and slap her on her butt. they soon find out that she has a boyfriend. his two friends are still tempting him to do it anyway . as they are leaving they pass the girl and her boy friend. the two friends walk by first laughing and making weird noises. CJ walks by, pauses and slaps the girl on her behind. she screams and immediately looks at her boyfriend..  CJ's friends run away the boyfriend turns around and stares him down.